This is Amrita’s world…

A summer evening / night

On a summer evening, felt like saying a prayer,
Feelings running deep, waiting to be shared.
Ambitions aimed high, they show up bare,
Just like the clouds amidst the sun rays.

The sun sets, its beauty heals hearts that break,
A small bud blossoms, only when it is spared.

As the moonlight creeps in ,
The world goes to sleep.
The stars are twinkling,
From the skies they shyly peep.

Reality is soon to be a memory,
Promises in the air,
Dewdrops next morning,
Its peaceful everywhere.


June 9, 2007 - Posted by | my poems


  1. did u write this ?

    Comment by amritha | June 12, 2007 | Reply

  2. Hi Amrita,

    Reached here after following the ‘my poems’ tag.

    Beautiful poem. Expressions are simply so picturesque. The last two lines are soothing.

    Keep it up.

    Comment by Prem Piyush | June 13, 2007 | Reply

  3. thank you so much!

    Comment by amrita | June 16, 2007 | Reply

  4. Nice poem. Simple and Sweet.

    Comment by Krish | June 18, 2007 | Reply

  5. liked this post.
    nice 🙂

    Comment by TS | July 2, 2007 | Reply

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