This is Amrita’s world…


I feel a feeling,
Somewhere inside the core of my heart
I know that this sweet feeling
Will never come out apart.

I can’t express it,
It’s beautiful, yet its sad,
It’s like a bad dream,
I don’t want it to come true.

It’s like a mother’s tender touch,
That takes away her child’s pain,
But for now, it’s just too much,
And it cannot be explained,

I can hear sad whispers,
And I want to reply and say,
I want all emotions and these sad memories
To simply go away.

– Written on 17th June, 2002


June 28, 2007 - Posted by | my poems


  1. Hey! A very good attempt.

    Keep it up..

    Comment by Tushar | July 2, 2007 | Reply

  2. dnt knw the situation when u had to pen down the lines…but found very encouraging to my present times… a gud one… Keep going

    Comment by bharat | July 2, 2007 | Reply

  3. its simple but with depth….. nice work…

    Comment by vinay kashyap | July 5, 2007 | Reply

  4. The writings reflect the sense of humor you have. Simply rocking ..great job keep it up..

    Comment by vamshi | July 6, 2007 | Reply

  5. thank u everyone!

    Comment by amrita | July 15, 2007 | Reply

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